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My Travail
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My Travail |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Travail I read the stars and suns avail Yet feel the feeling of travail Stand and eat or be the eaten Either that or be a Cretin It seems to be the way of go Or should I say the way of flow Events that change the changing grime That forms the dust to new in time This bit of dust that caught the stream Seem the remnants of a dream and I but smile this mot of wile A guile that floats upon the Nile Perhaps the wrappings are too tight This binding of my mind in flight This brew of will and times instill That does not fill this grimes distill It makes no difference what I would I sailed the sea of what I could |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For in the all that you have seen you stood for good and for all dreams You gave your mind, your lines and hours So, we in turn, say, "Poet, ours"! ~*~  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are my sunshine.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It seems to be the way of go Or should I say the way of flow Events that change the changing grime That forms the dust to new in time  your words and thoughts are our morning food for thought Sey...you make such wonderful mornings, thank you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Now that is a gentle reply. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This bit of dust that caught the stream Seem the remnants of a dream and I but smile this mot of wile A guile that floats upon the Nile Perhaps the wrappings are too tight This binding of my mind in flight This brew of will and times instill That does not fill this grimes distill It makes no difference what I would I sailed the sea of what I could =================================== That closing couplet's wisdom and intend is cooler than cool... as are these lines.... I but smile this mot of wile A guile that floats upon the Nile Perhaps the wrappings are too tight This binding of my mind in flight I do so love the way your poetic mind works... youre certainly no "Cretin" ... but then there is a certain dragon we all know and love... LOL   *ww*  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
master Sy..I don't know if I should read you alone or with JM's contributions.......what a pair you two are when it comes to wisdom and illustration (will let you two fight it out as to which is which hehe) dug it sir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gooood Morrrrning, T-Man! I'll make like I'm Cleopatra and flow with your mots down the river of De Nial! I always enjoy the offerings from your illustrious pen!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed this morning's write Sy. Have a wonder-filled day! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: profound truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I thank you for your time and grace I'm glad we live this time and space. WWRS Earth Angel, You are so cute, " down the river of De Nial!" Nancy, Thank you sweet. Midnitesun You are a dear, Hugs. vandana Thank you for the nice. Dark Stranger Enjoyed your remark, thank you. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (07-22-2004 12:53 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed this mornings visions you've mapped out for us...thank you Sy, good morning and have a wonderful day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you, my pleasure. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"I read the stars and suns avail Yet feel the feeling of travail Stand and eat or be the eaten Either that or be a Cretin" Words to live by...thank you, Sy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always food for thought |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And that's how I see it, too, Seymour. Enjoyed your work. .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Always enjoy your comments. passing iliana Thank you sweety. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I sailed the sea of what I could And that's all any of us can do. *S* I enjoyed this very much! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweety. |
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