Open Poetry #33 |
Until Thighs (my response to Kevin's - Thereupon Thy Kiss) |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
painting by: gerald o'connell "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are too good! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
OMG! Thump...thump...thump. Choke! Sorry just had to swallow my beating heart there. Woohoo Snow! Now that is what I call HOT! Love it! I think the master has just been outclassed...but what the heck...I'm not one to give up. I am just getting ready for work. 9 hour days this week! Groan. But it gives me the time I'll need to formulate a response to this. (Snicker!) You have just penned something that is truly remarkable Susan. Bravo! I don't normally do erotic...but give me a day and let us see what I come up with. Hee hee hee. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Absolutely WOW, Snow! Sounds like EV2 will have to put his next one somewhere behind closed doors though! lol! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well, i think that kevin writes in much the same way i do ... layered enough that it can be taken in whatever direction your mind chooses... which is why it's such a pleasure to play with someone who can use words in this manner. i'm enjoying the journey. and according his mail... so is he :-D thank you all for the encouraging words. kevin, writing for you is very much, my pleasure. however, i don't think you're outclassed.. lol. though it did wonderful things to my head to think so for a moment. lol! all in all... what matters is that you were pleased with the work. ~hugs~ S~ |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
This just has to go back to the top before I begin my response to it! LOL! Just got home from work...give me 3 hours and then lets see what I have. (Wink!!!) Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
...................tease. *wink* |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Snow...I bet you think I had given up on this. Not so...just had a lot of trouble coming up with a response to it that I liked. I've been playing with various themes since you originally posted this...and finally I have settled on something. Hope it was worth the wait! LOL Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Wolf777 Junior Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 20 |
YOU!Are dangerous with words. I fell under the spell years ago. M. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
LOL. well thanks for the smile. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
did i make you speechless ???? :-) "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a great post! ~ scintillating and sensuous and beautifully presented! ~ and I enjoyed the feedback it received as well! I broke out laughing at your response to Grimm's reply ~ or rather the lack thereof! Glitches happen! EA |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
wow.... |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
EA, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your feedback. thank you !! Chris.... what can i say... truly, the responses from you have been very heartfelt .. thank you!! "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A silky pleasure to read...I'll be back...James |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"silky pleasure" james that was such a wonderful thing to say. thank you very much! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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