Open Poetry #33 |
Black Hole |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Black Hole My heart has been cleft in two. Into the gorge let spill an eddy of darkness, a maelstrom of time. Gravitational inflow, pull to the event horizon all that made me a man. Conscience, needs, wants; what claim have I for these? Take them I beseech thee. Allow me to be as compassionless as the emptiness in which this black hole was birthed. Then…only then…I will know rest and disremember the she whom it was that made this heartache so unbearable. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Allow me to be as compassionless as the emptiness in which this black hole was birthed. Then…only then…I will know rest and disremember the she whom it was that made this heartache so unbearable Hope you feel better, EV. Heartache creates wonderful poetry though. Take care, misc'e |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh hell yeah... fanfriggintastic..you got me wanting to be on my feet testifying... lol stop laughing at me... :P i so love this i'm going to print it out and keep it with all the other ones.. it's that damn good.. but mostly it's because it says what i so want to say and never seem to do ! ::bowing to you:: honored as always to read you my sweet friend... love, me "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
wow do I know this feeling...my heart goes out to you sir. Very heartfelt write I enjoyed it a great deal, your emotion shines through the entire piece and just pulled at my heartstrings... ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow ~Bella~ |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
This is good one. I know the cure for that but will save it for later. ;-) Hugs |
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