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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-07-21 07:38 PM

I don't want to hurt you
Iam sorry If I hurt you
I want to make it up to you
Day by day
I want to take your hand
And make it alright

I need you to understand
I never meant to make you cry
Didn't mean a thing I said
Please tell me you are willing
to give us another try

I don't want to make you cry
I want you to try
To understand that
I still love you
And I want you to
be happy
I don't want to to hurt you
ever again

Please let me hold you
Let me dry your sad eyes
sweet baby,don't you realize?
With all that Iam,I'm sorry
I never meant to hurt you so
I love you,please....don't go.

[This message has been edited by vandana (07-22-2004 10:16 AM).]

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2004-07-21 09:31 PM

dang, you portrayed the degeneration of a relationship with insight and truth. most times it is to late, when the ones we hurt move on, leaving us to finally realize............

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2004-07-21 09:37 PM

This leaves me teetering by tears, wishing with my hand out to be able to reach the one leaving. Sad but honest depiction...
Well done, both of you.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-21 10:52 PM

It is difficult, when one forgets to tread carefully --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-07-22 12:03 PM

Vandana, it is always so refreshing to see you duet with our poets...thank you both for this lovely!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-07-22 12:11 PM

Very very nice duet by two of Passions finest.
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-22 12:39 PM

this is precious

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-07-22 12:50 PM

A plaintif plea from two popular PiP poets!

A beautiful collaboration!

&

EA

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2004-07-22 01:03 PM

thank you all very much, I had a lot of fun doing this duet with Vandana.

I'm so glad she asked me to!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-07-22 02:58 PM

there are a lot of emotions here....
Keeping you close in thought that all works out for both of you...

A very serious and bittersweet read

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-07-22 11:16 PM

Kind heart, tender write. Enjoyed......jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-07-24 12:23 PM

Lovely...James

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