Open Poetry #33 |
Loves Me, Loves Me Not |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loves Me, Loves Me Not "Flowers whisper what words never say" a sign I passed while on the way. I grasped for a pen and paper to write knowing the need, words holding tight. Repeated it times more than once, thinking back to the last time received, those flowers I lack. Though the blooms tend to wilt long before comes their time Still more do they say ... than these words placed in rhyme~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what a sweet surprise...thank you Bernie M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Bouquet of flowers and evening showers to keep them blooming for you… Someday you’ll find a person so kind who will whisper those words never said… Yep, I believe you will. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
seems sometimes nobody understands what we need... and just how empty it can be without a sign, a note, proof. Good to read you, I've missed having the chance to... Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a lovely write, I like this alot. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Indeed, flowers given for the right reasons can say volumes,,,,and the words said last way past the wilting of the blooms,,,,however,,,flowers given for the wrong reasons,,,,well,,,cause the pain to remain in heart,,long after they have faded,,, Michelle To be held, is all I ask...... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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