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Daring You
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Daring You |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Daring your heartbeat to breath, to walk with me Emotional intellect seduced our being Rendering birth from any conditioned reflex The opening of possibility, as well as closures To fragilities could have been our wholeness Our desires Embracing the whole of our souls Remembering our perpetual mistakes Its foolishness, its finitude, became desires brave I didn’t want our desolate pass of loneliness To be the words “I love you” Each time you drew close, our form became limitless A beauty opened, defining ascension to the place Where ordinary beauty became poetic imagination Liberating our vessel, like faith encompassing failure Sometime, those possibilities are exchanged To a desire for truth, if only once in a lifetime Finding the humility, spiritual connection An enormous triumph of Death to emerge Stubbornly whole and alive, approaching true feelings Letting go of the hand of mischievous sprites To me, Our kindness, was beauty recklessly poignant A secular union and truth of feelings Offering to us, accurate pleasures of being Organized only by our unpredictable nature Filled with inspiration Our failures...over rode, but I still dared You to fall in love with me You couldn't |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Hi Lee J I read ya poem it tells alot about the thoughts we have so much inside, i dont know if i should smile or cry but i love the words and how it was told. Smile Jes / Dreamer Life is for mee to be ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
falling upwards is hard for some unless they believe they can fly kewl stuff ms L |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, you are a person so filled with expression that it does leave me speachless and really unknowing how to react but to say well done my friend. Sincerely Rick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps you should have double-dared him! In any case, I think he should have taken the dare and "risen" in love. A moving write from your eloquent pen. ~ May love, in whatever form it comes, be your constant companion in life.  Love & Light, Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice Lee J. I must agree with all the above, very nice indeed! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I can really relate to this!! wow! |
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