Open Poetry #33 |
Of Impurity |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of Impurity Man is chaos, impurity Born of an acts uncertainty That is what I’m lead to believe Findings of our latest conceive It is a theory of the whole They make no mention of a soul And that will make a useless why For time was born the same as I If it began then it will end And that’s the if we must contend If that’s the path of evermore Then eternity has a floor Unless we speak of non exist And that is a whole other twist For in that none, we have the all And that would be my theories call So if you truly wish a soul Than non exist should be your goal |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, surely Sy, deep stuff for so early in the morning...and yet..as always true blue exploration Smiles...Good morning Sir, wishing you a lovely day |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Hi Seymour Long time since i have stepped by, but as always your poetry is great, this gave abit thoughts to think of. Smiles and a good day Jes / Dreamer |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm! Now there's some food for thought! That puts a whole different spin on the phrase "to cease and desist"... Your philosophizing, sonneteering mind never stops! ~ and thank goodness for your readers! Good morning, T-Man! ~ May you forever exist! ~ in one form or another! EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning, Sy. As I skipped along your path of words this morning, it made me think of some of the non-worthy news I got to hear earlier... and left me, of course, chuckling... So I'm serving bagels...who's got the hot tea? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ No deeper than a finger dip. LOL Good morning. Dreamer@ Nothing to worry about, glad to see you back. Earth Angel I'm sure I'll exist in one form or another. LOL Sunshine Thank you, I'll be right there. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is a theory of the whole They make no mention of a soul And that will make a useless why For time was born the same as I =============================== Verses like this serve proof as to why you are our Poetic Prophet, our King of the Cadence Couplet... and Wizard of Wisdom. and then there is that dandy dragon *ww* I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Glad you had time to stop by. WWRS |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now, this is a marvel....for me to ponder! *hugs* ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
those last lines...always power-packed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana A ponder wonder. LOL passing, Glad you liked. |
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