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On Parting |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I rather not go like this, Given a smile instead of a kiss; I’d call you back, But the courage I lack, So you walk slowly away. My spirit is shadow, Desire longs to follow, But “rules of engagement” Disallows the rearrangement, Perhaps another day. Traffic static sounds, Chaos swirls all around And to darkness I bound, Sadly, safely away. Gloom |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..very, very, lyric; i much enjoyed.. spiros -------------- |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I rather not go like this, Given a smile instead of a kiss; I’d call you back, But the courage I lack, So you walk slowly away. I know the feeling and finality of this and enjoyed the entire poem..good one |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
dark=safe??? Wow, I must be really safe, I wear black everyday...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Now that is gloomy! Sad, but well expressed emotion in this write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the darkness is safer, isn't it? |
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