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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-20 11:20 PM

I found myself
A low sleek jaguar
Red in flash and passion
Curvaceous
As if saying . . .

“take me for a spin”

This body, it was smooth
lucious
Elegant
A second skin

The engine throbbing at a low purr
Pressing to the road
Embracing every inch
Humming in seduction . . .

“we were meant to be lovers, you and I”

Toss caution to the wind
Hug those curves
Take the corners tight
The thrill is in the drive

“take me for a spin”

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

[This message has been edited by Susan (07-21-2004 10:31 AM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-20 11:34 PM

Whoa, Susan! Sexy poem! And, BTW, great metaphor. Now, hang in there and don't speed too much!!! hehehe & hugs, jo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-21 04:06 AM

nice

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-21 10:06 AM

Jo, you know, I can't drive 55

Thanks for your reply. Jag's my favorite car. In one of those, look out baby!

P.S.

backatcha -- thanks.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-07-21 07:46 PM

If this doesn't sell cars, nothing will!!
How much did you say it was?

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-07-21 07:56 PM

Wow! Is this a convertible? Sounds like someone is going for a joy ride!
Heehee… great play on words. Enjoyed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2004-07-21 09:29 PM

That was absolutely gorgeous. Wow, to feel the love...or lust...that this individual feels would be to have every answer to every secret prayer I've ever had. It was beautfiul.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-07-21 10:35 PM

You all make me blush, but sometimes a girl's just got to push the curve

Thanks for the fun replies,

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

8 posted 2004-07-21 11:05 PM

Growl! LoL. Really racy poem! I think this one belongs in Mature Content! LoL. A great write (not to mention a way to get everyone sweating in here!)
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-07-22 08:26 AM

Racy, yes -- fast curves. Thanks for your reply Allison-- I enjoyed it.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-07-22 03:13 PM

Very sensuous writing!

Eric

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-07-22 04:17 PM

Thanks Eric for the compliment. This was a fun write enhanced by a mood, which always helps.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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