Open Poetry #33 |
Thereupon Thy Kiss (My response to Snow's - On Cardinal's Breath) |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thereupon Thy Kiss Thereupon thy kiss let my ardor sweep, 'Til buoyant affection meets horizon, For it's thither in the terrene of sleep, Our affaire d'amour we'll build upon. Evensong whispers of jasmine blossoms, Yea waft within this clandestine place, And we will weigh anchor 'til time succumbs- -To the fervency which we would embrace. I’ll chisel, “I love you,” from stony tongue, As the mainsail snaps fore the northern gale, And sing the songs that have remained unsung, Aye through the tempest our need would prevail. Phorcys keep thy Sirens for lesser swains, For ‘tis only she who can stir these veins. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I’ll chisel, “I love you,” from stony tongue, As the mainsail snaps fore the northern gale, And sing the songs that have remained unsung, Aye through the tempest our need would prevail. Phorcys keep thy Sirens for lesser swains, For ‘tis only she who can stir these veins." Oh my...OH SIGH!!! This is SO romantic...love it!! Now how about another duet with Snow? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your sultry, sensuous, and highly expressive words, gave me goose bumples! Love & Light, EA |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
omg..... ::::::thud:::::: your other readers will have to step over me...i think my knees are too weak to move.... ...................inspiration rises but i am so not done responding to this!!! you're raising the bar on me... *soft smile* this is so damn good!!! hugss.... me "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is nice...I'm enjoying |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
no way am i ready to let this drop too far down already |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Kevin (Shakespeare), You have away in which to take my breathe away. ( you know what that is. smile) you just done it again. I love this. Hugs from me to you :-) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i had to much love, s "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BRAVO! BRAVO! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Kevin You 'da man enjoyed -------ce ><> |
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