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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay! By: Noah Eaton 7/20/04 Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay!  Baby, you bring out the best in me, you're just the one to teach the world to sing, It's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, So many want to turn back the clocks, but all I want is to look ahead with you, baby... Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Baby, so many care about new shoes and diamond rings, but your fresh face is all I need to see, I love it when your hair brushes your lips, and when you blush your smile's like strawberries and cream, from your lemon poppyseed freckles, to your knees of your bees, I love you baby... Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Cause happiness is a way of travel, not a destination, and life is always beautiful, when I'm travelling with you, Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! I just love the scenery, when I detour through your mind, you make me love every mistake I've made, clumsiness is pretty when I see the light in your eyes, you're a vacation within a vacation, you're the rhythm in my every rhyme... Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Cause happiness is a way of travel, not a destination, and life is always beautiful, when I'm travelling with you, It's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, it's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
it's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, Awww....would love to hear you sing this sweet one Noah!! Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a delightfully precious song of innocent love and joy! I want to kick up my own heels and sing along! Yay! Happy hugs, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, you sound so happy and in love! This rocks with joy!  .....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Noah, when I saw the title the first thing I thought of was they had the election and the President lost...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious...like you  |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Yay - yay - yay - yay Smile Jes / Dreamer Life is for mee to be ! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Cause happiness is a way of travel, not a destination, and life is always beautiful, when I'm travelling with you, It's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, it's not being perfect that makes you special, it's just being as perfect as you can be, You are very wise Noah...and yes, she is most certainly a wonderful traveling companion, keep her close and cherish her unique imperfections...smiles and hugs |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great song! Record, make an MP3 and repost so we can hear it! Enjoyed. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Noah, It's good to read you again. (You knew me by another name, but with my computer skills, I managed to lose that old name. Sad or lite, as you make it.) Just wanted you to know I haven't forgotten how special you are in the PIP family. You are a gem. I'm glad to see you posting again, and especially glad to feel the shine of your happiness. "Cause happiness is a way of travel, not a destination" TREMENDOUS philosophy! Loved your lyrics-real keepers. misc'e |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a second trip to remember the library click |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Sounds like somebody is in love This is a simply stunning beauty! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beautifully sweet! As everything you write! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I just love the scenery, when I detour through your mind, Yay! Love this. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
lovely uplifting words here Noah!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah I love the good feeling that comes from this...the poem almost jumps up and down. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Noah I have been missing you in the other forums and I came looking for you to be sure you are okay. I found you here, happy and in love. I am so glad. Love, Joyce |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
delightful Noah! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
WOW! Everything you say is the most amazing thing I've ever read! That was absolutely beautiful. "Cause happiness is a way of travel, not a destination, and life is always beautiful, when I'm travelling with you." That is a very inspiring line of verse. What else can I say? YAY! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Whoever this is to is a lucky duck!!!! Absolutely adorable write. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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