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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-07-20 02:10 PM


If I could make a dream come true
there's one place that I'd want to go,
a special place to laugh and share
as we'd walk through the drifts of snow;
recalling the memories we've made across the miles
the heartache and pain, the joys and the smiles...

Through the twinkle in your emerald green eyes
I'd hear your childrens laughter, even if their long grown
my heart would feel that I've known them
through the love that you've shown.

Could you still think back, and remember the day that we met?
For me, it's a day that I know..
my soul will never forget.

Since the day that you have befriended me
I know how much of a better person that I've come to be...
You have shared your strength, your warmth...
and your light...
through your words and heart
I've seen a spirit in flight....

and I've heard a voice, that of an angel



so if some day, a vacation ever comes to me...
this is the place I think that I'd like to be...
visiting a dear friend who gives more..
than she will ever....could ever know....

Lady  



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-20-2004 03:04 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-07-20 02:14 PM



Your special friend...
will smile so beautifully....

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-07-20 02:14 PM


someone once told me, you can always tell a person's heart by the way the talk about and to their partents...it is so true

This was georgous!  Thank you for sharing.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-07-20 02:15 PM


and what a beautiful smile she has...
almost as beautiful as her heart!!
Thanks Kari.

Lee, you are a peach, thank you.

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4 posted 2004-07-20 02:32 PM


gorgeous heart you have there
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-07-20 02:34 PM


Blessings to you and your friend Donna...
This is truly lovely.
Hugs~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-07-20 02:39 PM


Dawn~  Hugs gal...

Nancy, we are all so lucky to have her words and friendship...
and yes...I feel very blessed.
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Susan
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7 posted 2004-07-20 02:43 PM


A beautiful and loving gift.  The touch of a dear friend is priceless, yes?

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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8 posted 2004-07-20 03:26 PM


there are angels among us....you are one of them, with a golden heart.....this made me smile, made me cry, and made my week....keeping this....luv you lady....


hugsssss


ME~

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-07-20 03:31 PM


Susan, thanks so much you are so kind!

L~ I knew you would know.... also.....

iliana
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10 posted 2004-07-20 11:09 PM


Donna, this was so sweet.  Hope you get that vacation!  ....jo
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11 posted 2004-07-21 04:12 AM


make the time
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2004-08-07 10:04 AM


Again, My thanks to all.
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