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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-20 01:43 PM

Make Me

I like the way you dream
the way it lays
across a cotton thread
I wish I could
hold you that close
that it keeps me
awake as I watch you
all wrapped up tidy
as I am so unarranged

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-07-20 01:45 PM

hmmm... this one settles well

I've a soft spot for cotton...and things written about it...

nicely done ma'am

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-07-20 02:12 PM

Love this Helen. Perfect. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

3 posted 2004-08-04 03:21 PM

Isn't it amazing
when opposites attract?

Thank you for this, Helen.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2004-08-04 07:13 PM

enjoyed

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2004-08-04 10:47 PM

amazing, Lady

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2004-08-04 10:55 PM

Oh my, Helen. Seems like you and I have the same kind of life.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-08-06 02:10 AM

awesome!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2004-08-07 01:00 PM

h
love the depth and complexity of your work
hardly "unarranged"
e

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

9 posted 2004-08-07 07:12 PM

The possibility that you are unarranged might exist, however your ability to put words and phrases together certainly is not.
Great Job.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-08-07 08:04 PM

Like this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

11 posted 2004-08-08 10:30 AM

I must be doing it wrong too -- there's a dream I've had repeatedly since childhood, and it's bliss -- but a dream may not be enough to make things go the way we want them to go, as you know all too well yourself, it seams.

~~J

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