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Open Poetry #33

Waking ages of life

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-07-05 04:42 PM

Fall into eternity
Waking ages passing me
Many faces I have seen
Turn to dust as years drain on by.

Tell a story of places long ago
Listen to my eras I’ve seen raised
And fallen from the passage of new to old.

Walk in my shadows if you will
Make yourself a mere companion of time
Forever turning with the wheel
Till all things made run dry.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-07-05 05:33 PM

very perceptive write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-07-05 06:15 PM

"Walk in my shadows if you will
Make yourself a mere companion of time"

~ It appears to me though yours would be a very tall shadow that has seen and experienced a great deal as your companion in time.

EA
Wonderful to read your words again!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-05 06:33 PM

Enjoyed your perspective in this write, RedStoneEB.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-06 02:25 AM

kinda sad to me

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