Untitled...(sorry can't think of a title)

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Open Poetry #33

Untitled...(sorry can't think of a title)

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-07-20 03:48 AM

the words leave my mouth like poisen,
begging for you to take them,
drink them in
till theres none left.

but you won't touch them
you won't even listen
when i say i love you.

does it hurt you to kiss me
your hearts not into it
i won't apologize to you
i won't say i'm sorry,
and beg you to stay.

even if the thought of losing you,
torments my every dream
my every thought
i can't let myself be that vulnerable
for someone who doesn't give me the time of day..anymore..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-07-20 04:51 AM

understanding this well...too well

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-07-20 09:54 AM

well expressed... sad, and a sadness too many understand..

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2004-07-20 10:25 AM

this is
just another verse of a song
i know all too well

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-07-20 10:28 AM

perhaps in the loss of you, he will eventually understand...all to late, yet reap from a wealth of knowing you, if he allows...

bittersweet words from a heart which embraces the wealth of you very well.

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

5 posted 2004-07-21 11:27 PM

WoW

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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