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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2004-07-04 09:12 AM

Think Of Me

Copyright 2004 by:Mark V Sheldon

Think of me

when the day’s burdens have left you

in a moment’s peace and time holds you in reminisce

though distant, vivid still

tenderly touching another life shared

before a turn of path traversed together

in fleeting sojourn

rendered me

a memory

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-07-04 09:16 AM

Beautiful Mark..
And you shall never be but just a distant memory...
Your words will live on forever...this is wonderful..
So very much enjoyed m'friend.
Happy Fourth Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-04 09:22 AM

MARK,
You have made a strong imprint on me.

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-07-04 09:37 AM

Well done Mark, I believe you will be
remembered, no doubt at all.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2004-07-04 09:38 AM

Mark, I think of you often, and doing so always puts a smile on my face.This is a graceful and gentle, if melencholic write. And it's always a sad moment when someone you care about moves out of your life, even when the memories are savored.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-07-04 11:01 AM

yes, that precious Time when memory begets serenity...

nicely penned, sir...

~K~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-04 11:31 AM

Enjoyed this. It is bittersweet to be a but a rememberance.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

bslicker

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state of mind

7 posted 2004-07-04 11:42 AM

enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

8 posted 2004-07-04 12:18 PM

Very much enjoyed the beautiful flow of this Mark, so much, it will be remembered and I will put it on a shelf in my libary to save it there.

....jo

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2004-07-04 12:27 PM

some things can never be forgotten

SimplyGold
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10 posted 2004-07-04 01:21 PM

Very tender, your ubiety is impressive and appreicated.

SG

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-07-04 01:51 PM

I am sure she still does...

So wistfully sweet and tender.

Happy 4th hugs,
EA

Ericc
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12 posted 2004-07-04 03:18 PM

Great write Mark!

Eric

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

13 posted 2004-07-04 05:10 PM

when the day’s burdens have left you

in a moment’s peace and time holds you in reminisce

Eloquently expressed, as was the rest. These lines especially captured me. Thanks for sharing.

miscellanea

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2004-07-04 08:22 PM

Mark~
Such an uplifting read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

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Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2004-07-04 08:41 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Mark.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2004-07-04 09:59 PM

MARK - I can say not more about your writings, as they are all suberb...

BC

Martie

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17 posted 2004-07-05 01:24 AM

Mark

Poignant and touching to hold a memory this way without bitterness.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

18 posted 2004-07-05 03:46 AM

GREAT WRITE!

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

19 posted 2004-07-05 06:02 PM

A very kind thank you to each and every one of you who took the time to read this poem and to respond according to your thoughts. I am always grateful to you...

-MVS

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Margot
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20 posted 2004-08-30 10:56 PM

Wonderful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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