Open Poetry #33 |
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Sins of Babylon |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
What was once the lucidity of innocence, Has been torn parallel to the sins of Babylon Should I stray from my fears? But if not for these comforting tears What should I free my rage in - These tears pour upon my soul like the rain in the storm It is the anger that burns within - Releasing its violence into the wind The sense of wonder, and lucidity - I know Heaven breathes Not words of praise, but songs of sin I curse this requiem |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow, one can feel the power of the emotion behind this. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no sense in the anger yeah I know...easier said than done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
btw, you know where I'm at if you wanna talk hope you're ok |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is should a strong poem. I'm clicking library so I can read itt again and again. |
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