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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2004-07-17 07:27 PM

"One Another"

One heart beats
Another in rhythm
Sounds over written
Heard

One eye cries
Another sheds
Dripping flowing
Moist

One body shivers
Another warms
Far without
Lost

One soul feels
Another duplicates
Inside wants
You

One Spirit Knows
Another shares
Love given
Us

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-17 07:36 PM

Whiskey! Good to see you again -
it's been awhile! Welcome home!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-17 08:06 PM

Like this a lot!

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-07-17 08:08 PM

Loved the play with words in L3 & 4 of each stanza.

"One soul feels
Another duplicates
Inside wants
You"

That is my favorite.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-17 08:11 PM

I liked this a lot!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2004-07-17 09:19 PM

Really wonderful writing! I liked the form and the contrasts you used.
misc'e

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2004-07-17 09:29 PM

How touching.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-07-17 10:03 PM

Julie this is wonderful!!
So good to read you again.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-07-17 10:54 PM

My goodness! You've been gone a long time! ~ enjoying your baby I presume!

A lovely write! So good to see and read you again! Hope all is well with you!

Warm hugs & smiles,
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-07-17 11:39 PM

beautiful

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