Open Poetry #33 |
Brick Walls |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I needed this today...thank you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Actually, I just flap my wings and fly over those ding-dang brick walls! lol Loved this, Marge!!!! Loveya, EO |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some of us are slow learners... and have the bloody heads to prove it! *G* I like this very much! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Loved this concept Margie! wonderful.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhehe, just adore your mind and heart thank you for sharing. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I love the way you did this one. Love ya, Betty |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge! You are just SO creative! Love how your mind works! Excellent job here. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I absolutely adore this, its presentation, its message, its delivery. Thanks for the great big smile! Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Every now and then we all put up brick walls. I know I can't fly but it never occurred to me to just walk around it. Thanks for the insight Marge. I love the wall. Love Isobel ox |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...so creative and full of wisdom! Eric |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is terrific! Something we all need to remember! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ You folks are all so wonderful ... I have such fun playing with words and you let me know it's well worth the effort~ THANK YOU~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, you are my hero for today! Loved this! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge! This is very cute and quite original in theme! Good message, too, dear lady! Corinne |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is so fresh and original -- kudos Marge I love it! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read sweetPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
This is lovely! enjoyed the read Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes when we walk around we find the path past the next wall. ... and have a chance to smell a few roses! Really enjoyed this and glad Dixie gave it a "bump". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank YOU for enjoying this little piece of me~ How wonderful to have our Ms CocoBaci perusing the back pages~ It's a treasure just knowing you are here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! This had slipped me by ... strange, as I too am a champion of the sort! You have done this with such lovely creativity, obtaining a supereffect! Enjoyed! Nice that CocoBaci brought it up again. Baci Baci Margherita |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL...cute! Here's something my mom gave me a while back: AUTOBIOGRAPHY IN 5 SHORT CHAPTERS 1) I walk, down the street. There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I fall in. I am lost...I am hopeless. It isn't my fault. It takes forever to find a way out. 2) I walk down the same street. There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I pretend I don't see it. I fall in again. I can't believe I am in the same place. But, it isn't my fault. It still takes a long time to get out. 3) I walk down the same street. There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I see it is there. I still fall in...it's a habit. My eyes are open I know where I am. It is MY fault. I get out immediately. 4) I walk down the same street. There is a deep hole in the sidewalk. I walk around it. 5) I walk down another street. By Portia Nelson Just read that again last night...how funny to read, this morning, what you wrote... Take care Miss Margie! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good one |
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