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sometime again in raspberry
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sometime again in raspberry |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said you were in the clouds but they were dark socks with the wet cling glue on but I made them dry enough to fall away from your eyes sometimes if only for awhile I brought you raspberries and you said it hurt a bit that way, but you wanted pain now you said the comfort was boring even though you always wanted older things for your little girl to play with cause they were used a bit and knew how to fit the hand it was time to make her ache again I said that was a contradiction you said don't argue just do it and that you would love me for it just sometime if only for awhile _____________ Dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, words cannot express the extreme feelings you grip the reader with. Another magnificant write...I do so enjoy reading you...thank you for writing and sharing your heart. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms LeeJ..thanks for your eyes ms...and likewise I admire your pen D |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you said don't argue just do it and that you would love me for it Dark, sometimes it just doesn't pay to argue! *w* Love your pen my friend. Hugs. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"it was time to make her ache again" SIGH and you do it sooooo well  |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
Brilliant is the only word I can think of right now. In my eyes, I'm not lazy. In your eyes, I'm not worth it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*SIGH SIGH* doubling the sighs |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
How could she not love you for all of that for more than awhile? ~K~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I hope the while is forever briar, ever plentiful of your raspberry gifts. Love, Reg |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
another one of yours has left me stirred, but with inability to state the feeling; I believe "struck" or "frozen in tracks" describes my reaction. Enjoyed. misc'e |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ The title bid me 'come in' ... and I knew the read would be laced with poignant ink .. it was and just wanting to say that you do the penning SO WELL~ Thank you for this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "just sometime if only for awhile" Yes! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Huge *SIGH* here D. Much enjoyed the feelings. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Always evocative, you. Corinne |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This speaks of deep intimacy to me. Stirring. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
cause they were used a bit and knew how to fit the hand it was time to make her ache again ============================= ya had me from the title on... *raising glass of raspberry tea* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very interesting writing style! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms GS.....sounds like me...the piece maker..or is it peace maker..hmmm will have to get the dictionary out..(grin) thanks hon _____________ Ms Sea......your sighs are such a turn on, Thanks to you _______________ Paper T, Thanks is the only word I can find to repay you for that review, well and Thaks Again. ___________ Midnite......mmmmmmmmmmm two sighs are too much for this ol guy to handle...thanks to you much ____________ MS Kahlil, we love to drink water when we thirst, but we feel surrounded when we swim....perhaps that is what love is ...just a moment of thirst when we come up for air? Thanks for your lovely thoughts _________ Ms Reg..briars are a man's best friend, they don't bark or poop...they just wrap you up and make you enjoy it. Thanks for the grin skin smile too. ________ Misc' friend.....paused is good...it is when i see the good parts of the movie...when I can study the expressions on the faces.....it is the best time, thanks you for pausing here __________ Ms Marge your eyes and your huggy creatures are wonderful blessings to my humble offerings, thanks to you so much _________ Ms Martie..lil neighbor yessss please just anytime of only for awhile, thanks lady friend ___________ Ms E....thanks for letting your lady enjoy the feelings...you are sweet windows on my word eyes. ___________ Ms Sun....mmmmmmmm you warm me with your orbs of sunshine thanks to you ___________ Ms Corinne..always a treat to see you wiggle a grin at my suggestions...thanks to you __________ Ms Susan, deep yes, using each other's music to dull the sound of silence...like a gunshot in a canyon with reverb it sooths (grin) thanks for your eyes ______________ Ms JM, my favorite tools are the ones that were used a bit, worn in, adjusted to comfort...by someone...then I redo them make them new again...experienced with out memories perhaps......thanks for yoru mothy visit _____________ Iliana, arrigoto for your interesting.. |
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