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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-07-16 01:06 AM



~*~

Like a beacon strobing innate
My eyes are summoned
Through the multitudes of faceless waves
Speechless every sculpt of muscle and bone
Made mark upon memory
Even change cannot devoid the moment
My eyes are summoned
Striking charge to chord
The archer draws his breath and bow
Elegant and strong the will of thunder
My eyes are summoned
Sinking into happiness
Awash upon my face
Magnetic pulls that lead to place
My eyes are summoned
Back against a wall of timelessness
Where you and I began
And all doubt ended

Copyright Kkh 7/16/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-07-16 01:36 AM


"Even change cannot devoid the moment
My eyes are summoned"

The windows of the soul....recognized.....Kathleen, what a great write!   ....jo

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-07-16 03:27 PM


Heart warming with great expectations.

“Where you and I began
And all doubt ended”

Excellent write!

JL



Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-07-17 12:03 PM


Mmmmm, yes, I like this one.  My eyes are summoned -- yes indeedybob.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-07-17 02:18 PM


Perfect.

Eric

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2004-07-17 08:36 PM


Ditto Eric.

perfection.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
6 posted 2004-07-17 08:52 PM


My eyes are summoned
Back against a wall of timelessness

nice!
                  misc'e

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2004-07-17 10:37 PM


in this place where all doubt ended.....
lovely imagery
a beautiful place to encounter i'm sure

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-07-17 10:40 PM


"Back against a wall of timelessness
Where you and I began
And all doubt ended"

Excellent!! Very much enjoyed Kathleen.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2004-07-17 11:55 PM


what a place!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
10 posted 2004-07-18 12:17 PM


"Back against a wall of timelessness
Where you and I began
And all doubt ended"

~ a nice a familiar place to be!

Another beautiful penning!

EA

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