Open Poetry #33 |
Holding Strings |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To draw the updrafts into melody Our hands entwine the ribbons of felicity Sky bound, in yellow orbs of breath blown sound So light, the feelings crowd inside expanding sight As if to lift us from confusions rawhide strain Up we go to hitchhike to another plane And I would tie this ribbon round your heart To let you float to sights remote where visions start As certainly I too attend the rise implied So light, these feelings full of hope inside And giggling to tug your shoes from earth I cling the slip of socks and shake the clouds in mirth Yet could you still contain the noise, restrain with poise this smile? Our chariot today, of basket woven hay, sightseeing promises in footloose style Copyright Kkh 7/15/04 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a wonderful feeling this poem gave as I read! I enjoyed the expressions and could hear the music softly playing as you touched the strings! Excellent....~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And I would tie this ribbon round your heart To let you float to sights remote where visions start As certainly I too attend the rise implied So light, these feelings full of hope inside And giggling to tug your shoes from earth I cling the slip of socks and shake the clouds in mirth" *smile* This was wonderful! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful poetry! Enjoyed. JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, making me think of balooning, something I've always wanted to do. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty write |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!!!! Eric |
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