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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2004-07-15 04:20 PM

I wish the fingertips
Of wind
Would graze my skin
Just a bit more gently

At times

For some days
I need a loving touch
A softly felt brush
To keep me going

One more day

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-07-15 04:27 PM

Oh... I know this well!!! *S* I know, too, what it is to pray for a gentle breeze... and be slapped with a hurricane. *S*

I liked this very much, Susan... good luck! *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-07-15 04:36 PM

Beautiful Susan...absolutely perfect!
I know exactly what you mean.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-07-15 05:12 PM

one more day.. well my friend.. may you find a whisper of breeze..for every day..

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2004-07-15 05:23 PM

I've always envied water...especially if you were in it..it's ability to touch you entire body all at the same time....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-15 05:58 PM

Oh, this is gooooooooooood, Susan! Wishing you gentle breezes......jo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-07-15 06:01 PM

ouch.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-07-15 06:02 PM

I often wish the same, Susan...
here's to one more day~~

hugs
M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-07-17 12:33 PM

Me too...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-07-17 04:15 AM

yeah, don't we all

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-07-17 02:20 PM

Beautiful.

The fingertip is always there...although often unrecognized.

Eric

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2004-07-17 03:29 PM

SusanC~
VERY nicely done and a pleasant read for sure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2004-07-17 05:10 PM

.... yes we go on softness and sweetness.
Beautiful melancholy.
Love, Margherita

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