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Heaven's Waiting
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Heaven's Waiting |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Heaven has been waiting upon my lips To tell you a secret that's been laughing for an eternity waiting for the opportunity for you to finally walk into my life Here you are so unaware so unsure of what this life is for you think love doesn't exist but could I possibly help you reconsider that it won't always be like this I promise you Let me kiss you with eyes closed Heaven has been waiting an eternity to get this right I'm quite positive I could help you reconsider your upside down frame of mind... please don't be afraid to taste my secret... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, after such friendly persuassion, how could any lady resist...lovely write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful piece here Kristen. So much enjoyed...good to read you here today. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes! *S* I love the sizzle of this! *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah, so nice to read your words again...finally. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kristen -- this is absolutely wonderful and I am clicking save to library right now! Really wonderful!  ......jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
"Heaven has been waiting upon my lips" Heck of a line. Love the feel of this entire piece. Well written.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ceinwyn Enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...james |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed just beautiful |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
upside down secrets always have a tase to remember.. I'm sure the one who tastes yours will forget fear.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice. I hope they listen. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kristen, I just had to come back and read this one again. I really, really liked the flow of it. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Lovely. Nuff said. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Once he tastes your secret, I'm sure he will realize that he has found heaven on Earth! lol  Adorable write! EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*huge grin* I do miss your beauty . . . |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Means alot to me...thanks and Sue!!! what!? Kiisssseeey face...haha I'm silly..*goes back to her corner* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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