Open Poetry #33 |
Angels Tears |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Drops of love Falling from the sky Staining the world Clearing the streets Washing the sins Of a dying world Explosions clapping the air Violence mixing With the howling Of demons racing Through the sky Leading to the silence Of angels tears Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Deep write man,,,,I like the way it starts,,shifts,,ends back where you started,,,,hits you hard and fast,,,,well enjoyed Michelle To be held, is all I ask...... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very deep write...got me thinking |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said Brad..good to read you again! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ringo, I hear you loud and clear. Good right! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
aww such a deep write very good Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Ringo, it is sooooooo great to read your wonderful poetry again, dearest friend! (sad sigh) I too pray for all the children of the world and their mothers and fathers who don't know what to say or hesitate to say it when they see all the violence and injustice affecting the innocence of the world and them and the angels can tuck them in bed with deepest love every night! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ringo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Please accept my sincerest apologies for not thanking everyone until now... I can only claim life and laziness. Michelle- As always, much love and hugs.. see you this weekend. PS- thank you for reading it. Nancy Lee- Hugs... Thank you for the kind words. Iliana- THanks Mucho.... I'm glad you enjoyed it. Foxy- Thank You. Noah- You are always so kind with your words... I thank you vwery much. James- Thanks. Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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