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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-10-19 07:37 PM


     Darla

Vision of someone
not yet seen
or heard, you moved
a sense of change.

Toys
wouldn't do
as they had before.
Days
were trips
to where you lived.

Briefly, and then
to different schools,
innumerable miles
with separate years.

I still have your picture.
The night is pure.

I hope your life
is full of good.
  



© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-10-19 07:44 PM


A wonderful wish for a good life to an old friend.
Very nicely said and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-10-19 07:48 PM


Very nice...James
jwesley
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3 posted 2004-10-19 08:46 PM


Much beyond the words, my friend, words special unto themselves....

jwesley

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4 posted 2004-10-19 09:05 PM


I think you have said very well the feelings
that many of us share...of a friend who
we remember,  even when they are far away.

Denise
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5 posted 2004-10-19 09:46 PM


Well done, John!
GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2004-10-21 02:12 AM


Such honest and sincere sentiments and wishes...
yet peaceful all the same.
I like this.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-10-25 04:51 AM


wonderful!
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-04-27 04:25 PM


hidden feelings.

beautiful.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2007-10-27 05:49 PM


john,

wonderful

ARCTIC WIND

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