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Resonate This Wish Still I am Deaf
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Resonate This Wish Still I am Deaf |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I wonder What words the wind whispers To the fragile leave in fall That turns cheeks blush And moves them to murmuring sighs That remind me of how you In half lidded release Would begin to mumble words Like Yessssssss Then loose your own grip And fall in a tumbled wave Of what I thought must be color Yet could not see through my own eyes I’ve listened And tried to pick out the phrases So softly left on leaf But wind seems to simply chuckle Silent whishes of vowels To flood my ears with the moan Of tossed clouds Rumpled on a bed of blue As if lovers who have tossed Clothes aside and lay now supine In an afterglow of sated summer heat Too tired to dress Too wicked to care They turn golden now As the blush retires from tips To stem And I wonder What whispers in this The autumn wind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again Ron, I am in awe....... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As if lovers who have tossed Clothes aside and lay now supine In an afterglow of sated summer heat Too tired to dress Too wicked to care ~*~ oh... yessssssssssssssss |
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*Stardust* Junior Member
since 2004-10-14
Posts 21Right there with you |
Cpat Hair this is wonderfully sensual. I very much enjoy reading your work. Grinning is my second language. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Awesome job!!! I was right there in the midst of your words to the very last drop. quatro |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
another yummy addition. If you keep writing I will build stuff...   "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
As if lovers who have tossed Clothes aside and lay now supine In an afterglow of sated summer heat Too tired to dress Too wicked to care I echo Karilea...yesssssss. another for the library. Maree and I am haunted |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
deft tapestry of words and sound that allow the elements to rise right off the page... love how you fingerpaint... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now you tease, because you KNOW how I feel about Autumn... and as to what I hear? why, that would be, "please... y'rogue you. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
excellent metaphors ingenious.. while im going to be spending the better part of autumn getting dearly laid, i still think this poem has a profound message |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this blanket of leaves play at your feet as the giggle of wind tickles with wishes and whispers ~that its time to live again~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Good lord, man! What have you been drinking! (Send some 'round to my table, will ya?) NICE! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, you are brightening my morning, Ron As if lovers who have tossed Clothes aside and lay now supine In an afterglow of sated summer heat Too tired to dress Too wicked to care |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cpat Hair, Mighty fine indeed. I always wondered what it was that attracted me to fall and now I know. Excellent kind sir. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! how do you do this? |
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