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On the Beach |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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One sliver of spontaneous Knocks the whole landscape To flowering… Blues…grays sink away I’m lucky To discover, this spot Core of lake Heart of light Devoted zealous Stretches on forever to flying flags Trumpeting in the wind Liquid fire ringing evening sky It is the color of great strides Botox tendering age Endowing Tune Carpenter’s smile Fragrance tugging on my gown Dreaming meditation How fair the complexion of warm wind Dropping a smile Everlasting, if... We knock on its door Like a gliding boat Returning to destiny Forgetting about any wink of time Undergoing…places which linger Like a home redecorated restructured With thoughts of illusions Transformed into infinity like a gliding boat sailing smooth clear azure waters of something spiritual |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This has such lovely, peaceful, tranquil images. I particularly like the carpenter's smile phrase. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A vision of beauty, LeeJ. I feel like I just visited there, as well!  ....jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is the color of great strides Botox tendering age Endowing Tune Carpenter’s smile Fragrance tugging on my gown Dreaming meditation How fair the complexion of warm wind Dropping a smile Everlasting, if... We knock on its door Loved the feel of your poem LeeJ, and how your words encompass and surround the daylight there. So pretty~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"Liquid fire ringing evening sky" LeeJ., the imagery in this line is phenomenal! Yet the poem keeps getting better and better throughout! The feel of this is one of promise. One of your best! misc'e |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful portrait, and poetry Lee J. JL  |
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