Open Poetry #33 |
Swimming with a Sea Ray |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Existence to me is not nearly expressive As the life which took me by the hand Smiled through clear blue gazes Together sharing belly laughs Like we were only seven Plucking each day like a badge of honor Perceiving the wise of future Drinking twilight wind Listening to lusty calls of ocean Fragrance of sea...intoxicating all cares Like fresh coolness of midnight Its faint perfume stirring golden sensors Glowing sweet aquatic candles Turning feelings into dialogue influential Five thousands words, whirl in articulation Spiraling around, laughing like children Something that earth stands on...composing All highlighted threads which team by our side Waiting with anticipation to be woven Images consistent like intellectual daylight The here and now...crowning unending green lands Where ethereal beauty summits in a single glance Inexplicable sorrows, blossom to hazelnut buds Filling paths where wind lives...impetuous Accompanying dance, singing in high voices Ode to delicacy, the fragile lingering butterflies Where do they go, what to they hear & speak? Does one know they’re moonlight fills sparingly? Unbroken, floating and waking all things... Where evening ensign loiters or’r foothill paths Changing time...tender loveliness of wild fire wings Wake...my beauty...among the waves a lone Just for a moment...it does not shudder or stare or mock But, trails in flight...gliding, gliding among a sea of smiling stars Reaching out with extending mirrors, peacefully Like a lotus pond, filled with dappled freshwater koi Gentle waves pour silence, waste deep, like a sleepless insomniac Scenting fascination lingers, like a favorable guest Water glistens with clear nights, quiet murmurs of companionship Darkness loiters...strikingly there is no fear? There are burning suns within, clearing mists, like an army Wonder donating prosperity with eminence walking freely There are no hairs thicker then this lamplight of weave No sound of mid-day, only unworldly feelings A comfort begins to hang waterfalls With golden rays of sunset ripples Drinking together shadows, like friends under the moon This ember fills my sleeves, towering any lute But a small path to drink, succumb to this waiting flower Slip away for a moment...filling empty hours Resounding together, harmonizing waters Like a smooth glass, still sea, gleaming a sound of worth, immensity Profound incarnates this shared infinity Idle beauty, seriously playful, proposing morning stars Mellow laments of exotic poems Lingers, always lingers near...walk for a moment with these tender feelings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I think if I indulged in all this I would get a belly ache. LOL Wonderful paint and a pretty picture. Have a good one. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I think you are on a roll! This is so interesting. “Ode to delicacy, the fragile lingering butterflies Where do they go, what to they hear & speak? Does one know they’re moonlight fills sparingly? Unbroken, floating and waking all things... Where evening ensign loiters or’r foothill paths Changing time...tender loveliness of wild fire wings” So vivid a picture. Wonderful write Lee J. JL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
did a ray ride down in Antigua this year they were butterfly people inviting with unconditional trust a world of feel em up hands kewl stuff ms J |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lingers, always lingers near...walk for a moment with these tender feelings oh I love this line Lee....so soft and beautiful this is.. Hugs. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Drinking together shadows, like friends under the moon This ember fills my sleeves, towering any lute But a small path to drink, succumb to this waiting flower Slip away for a moment...filling empty hours Resounding together, harmonizing waters Like a smooth glass, still sea, gleaming a sound of worth, immensity Profound incarnates this shared infinity Idle beauty, seriously playful, proposing morning stars Mellow laments of exotic poems Lingers, always lingers near...walk for a moment with these tender feelings" LeeJ, I went there with you for a little while! This poem was enchanting. ....jo |
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