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and bruise dearer |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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your eyes, a savage harvest, quicken me to drink from mirrors no less liquid than tears shed in a series of burnt circles beneath the thirsty equilibrium of eyes that will not tire their vigil, soaked in these most precious things you bring, dressed in fire, an epidermis of innocence driven from the outside~in, quickening in its mirror to recieve the sacrament of words in sinews of nerve-ends that burn, a resonance, explicit as split lips dip to kiss the thigh's inner rift, and spread its serum inward from the cupola of eyes in their savage harvest, feel them rise to cast fleeting shadows, so frail, revealing how easily our hearts grate on themselves, and bruise dearer. 2004 copyright babygirLPress |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful introspect here, very much enjoyed |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you Lee... **babygirL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ok, its official I'll just go sit over here in the section marked "Sycophant" Stellar, as always! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...wranx...as long as your sitting anywhere next to me... don't go anywhere... it only gets better...lol love&light, **babygirL** |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice word play... even with the repeating of some words in the piece it rivets the reader to follow... the next pour of thought.. a starkness in this.. I enjoyed.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote: I "sort of" said the same thing to myself once standing in front of a mirror, but not near as well as you did of course.  Morning, and bet you're crying about that baseball game, yes? |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
C~hair... thanks for checking this out... Mysteria~oh woe be to my Yankees...**shrugs** I am more of a boxing fan...any boxing fans out there? Maybe I'll post my Boxing-piece... lol **babygirL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow BabyG, you always leave me dumbfounded...and YES, I lerrve that. Thank you. Maree  and I am haunted |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, dear Maree... **babygirL** |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you are officially my new dictionary *grin* *laughing* again, dropping my jaw babyg |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...hey there, littlewing...lol thanks love... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
that burn, a resonance, explicit as split lips dip to kiss the thigh's inner rift, and spread its serum inward daaaamn |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yeah, what Aenimal said - damn -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
babygirlwlove A delight to read, enjoyed. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hey guys...thank you for the damn's...much appreciated..... and Seymour...thank you my friend... **babygirL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yep.. what everyone else said. ohhh you are so good. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, Susan! love&light, **BabygirL** |
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