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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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strobing with a displaced hip sideways eyes a-scramble-cling dancing dizzy light above... I want, I want, some clarity - probing with a misplaced quip sideways eyes are rambling to the spark a-re-flec-ting from the globe a whirl... I wanna be an honest thing skin me - I'm a dead rabbit. sideways slice - the eyes half-lit-- "I've-had-quite-enough-of-this" now I'm saying "no," Count me in the commonstead - parity-- a bodybag. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-17-2004 06:52 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have always thought you to be (extremely honest)...but I know what you mean... honesty in return would sure help...especially if understanding the question or situation without the other jumping to conclusions...or answering in what they think we would like to hear instead of truth. *making me think too much so early and I am going now...you too, get some rest!!! and that is an order!!!!!!! *smiling* M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you changed the title? hmmmm  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I want, I want, some clarity - "I've-had-quite-enough-of-this" ...you and me both!!! love ya ... h |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hope you don’t mind…. give me words of clarity letters formed from sincerity truth that I can understand that will not melt in heart or hand built on faith, hope and trust a solid grasp in blowing dust give me something I can hold not just words that I want told |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I see this on many levels - would it not be nice that we all be honest and equal - remembering we are each the same, even in our differences - Interesting food for thought here- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I think this parity was written by Flarity The Irish have a tendency to exaggerate. But well done.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You verse poelitically well... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
giggles at sy...I did have a bit touch of an infamous Irish habit in me when I wrote it.  oh well. So I got drunk and ticked off again--so what? giggle  thank you all very much for reading curtsy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
wow! cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at that curtsy. Now go find one I wrote for you in the sanctuary.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...what a great write! Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
WHO is making fun of the Irish, hmmm? *clutching me lucky charms* I am insane . . . but this, K? Tell me again why I deserve such space and time the physics to think such thoughts like a whirligig spun out of control crashing to burn before I am lit. (ok, that just popped out) you always make me vomit poetry.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You both need to vomit together your wants and desires me thinks. Suz that was a start of a good poem, Sen is rubbing off on everyone these days I tell ya! Ladies, today is all mine - I wanted and got! seems we just need to ask?  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
me and Karen vomiting together? sounds like the end of a good party to me . . . *grin* but, you are right . . . she always has . . . and good for you! |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
This is the first poem I've read since coming back from Iraq and I must say that it is a great piece. The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
rkcraig? Coming from you, my friend, that is the most awesome reply I could ever hope for. Welcome home, and thank you. (as for those ladies comments above you, don't mind them. They just like to find new and interesting things for me to do.  )You just made me proud, rk. Thanks again. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Now this just isn't fair... y'see I can waste hours sitting in front of paper and even at my best I can't come up with stuff like this. You're good! Love readin' ya... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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