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Denise

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0 posted 2004-10-17 01:14 AM

Such a fragile thing, resolve
our Achilles heel;
its bleeding and death absolve
Evil; hearts congeal
in fear
we tender
our surrender

again?

Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes.
Elizabeth Barrett Browning

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

1 posted 2004-10-17 01:28 AM

so many poems tonight that start my thought process in order to try and understand every little bit,although i belive,this is a poem that will never be understand universally in its magnificence.
enjoyed.

Denise

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2 posted 2004-10-17 02:50 AM

Thanks for your lovely reply, exhale!

Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes.
Elizabeth Barrett Browning

CocoBaci
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3 posted 2004-10-17 03:13 AM

I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem you share with us tonite...
It's a real treat of a read!

Copperbell
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4 posted 2004-10-17 03:17 AM

and again

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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5 posted 2004-10-17 10:13 AM

Dear, dear, Denise
Your words are flowing in their most glittering form'
Let them pour.
If I were a word in your heart, I would swirl in its splendor as long as I could, but would flow in ecstasy onto your page at the given moment
So nice he hear your heart
Love
Liz

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-10-17 02:02 PM

DENISE !!!!
You couldn't possibly imagine how pleased I was to see your name on the Daily Topics page~
The answer is VERY ... VERY~

A most enjoyable, enjoyable peek at your talent, my friend~
Thank you for being here ... for being a poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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7 posted 2004-10-17 04:30 PM

Or do we opt to rely only on faith? Much food for thought in this brief and excellent write. Good it is to see you writing here!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2004-10-17 04:33 PM

A great amount to ponder in such a short
but powerful poem. Good to see you posting
again...

Denise

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9 posted 2004-10-17 05:26 PM

CocoBaci - Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Copperbell - Thanks for reading and replying!

Elizabeth - I'm still having a problem with the words flowing onto paper thing. Thanks for such a beautiful reply! I miss you. We have to get together again soon.

Marge - And I am very, very pleased that you are very, very pleased!

Thanks for your kind words!

Larry – Yes, faith is the answer no matter the problem. I think without it, I’d have gone insane by now. Actually, I wrote this after reading an article about the resolve of the American people and how the dissolution of it is our enemy’s greatest weapon, hence, our Achilles heel.

Magnus – Thanks! It’s nice to know that I’ve been missed! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Contabo
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10 posted 2004-10-17 09:13 PM

Denise, it's been too long and now....you stole the subject of my next poem.

:-}

Contabo

Martie

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11 posted 2004-10-17 09:22 PM

Denise...A thought filled poem...I'm not surprised that you wrote it.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-10-17 09:33 PM

Good to read you Denise...well said,
leaving lots to think about.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

13 posted 2004-10-18 07:20 PM

....leaves me pondering some things, I'll keep to myself

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA

14 posted 2004-10-19 10:13 AM

Your words ring deep...
so nice to see your name on the blue pages again, you've been missed

skyshine

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Beneath the northern stars

15 posted 2004-10-19 01:33 PM

Well done, Denise! Good to see you again!

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

vandana

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16 posted 2004-10-19 05:02 PM

enjoyed

Denise

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17 posted 2004-10-19 09:41 PM

Thank you, my friends! I appreciate that you took the time to read and reply! It sure felt good to finally write something again!

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