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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-10-16 07:21 AM

The shadow of the Wind

She stays a ghost in deep retreat
Yet whispers to my fantasy
A shadow of the winds repeat
A rapture of minds melody

She lies within my frame of thought
Like colored fish near coral rock
A hiding place of safe resort
Without the burden of a lock

She plays within my shadows door
The very scent of rose and lace
An overture of evermore
The fragrance of a warm embrace

The shadow of the winds implore
A phantom on an island base
Desire and a well of more
The nectar of a flowers grace

She traces me each night I sleep
It’s only day time that I weep

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-16 07:34 AM

This one has a touch of melancholy to it Sy. Your last line grabbed me. I wouldnt ever want to see our dear Sy in weeping...
here's a big ole hug for you.

Good morning sir, happy weekend.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-10-16 09:34 AM

Mr. T., there is no doubt about it (as if there ever were any doubt!) ~ you ARE a poet. I truly am amazed by your talent ~ and the depth of your beautiful and sensitive soul.

~ May she "trace" you both night and day.

Loving hugs,
EA

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2004-10-16 09:35 AM

She traces me each night I sleep
It’s only day time that I weep
==============================

well then...we will just have to make sure Randy gets some naps and seistas!!! LOL
I do so love the shadows and rhymes of your mind Sy-babers. Send some warm winds this way...tis darn right chilly up here this morn.

*ww*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-16 09:39 AM

ah....the morning brings Seymour

yes *big smile*

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2004-10-16 09:41 AM

Much enjoyed Sy. Especially the line "an overture of evermore". Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-16 09:44 AM

Morning Sy!
I hope the morning sun never ever finds you weeping.
Ah..first a sonnet from Sy in the morning...
then my hot tea, and all is right with the world.
(well I can dream too can't I)

~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-10-16 10:06 AM

Seymour~
My friend ... you are rare word-wine~
Aged to heady perfection~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-10-16 10:32 AM

Gentle,
Some melancholia have a delightful sense.
Hugs

Earth Angel
You are on my list for the next life.

JM,
And the wind of chance did nuance
A seance of a lovely dance.
May the cold drift away
And the sun warm the day
Winkiewinkie

passing
May your day be as warm as your smile.

scorpio
Always enjoy your kind replies.

Nancy,
May it ever be so, love and hugs.

Marge,
Just wrote something about wine, but it wasn't rare. LOL You are a rose in my garden
Sniff Hugs

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-10-16 10:50 AM

Good morning, Sy

It is so good to read you this morning with my coffee.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-10-16 10:51 AM

And he is the shadow in my night,
the calm of dawn in morning's light;
He is the poet from whom love flows,
and his light glows within his know...

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

11 posted 2004-10-16 11:21 AM

Thank you for making my day. A cup of hot coffee, my love to read to me, and "Sir Sy's" words, drifting through my mind.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-10-16 11:25 AM

I too feel the melancholy, the hints of blue-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2004-10-16 12:38 PM

Martie
Thank you love.

Sunshine,

inot2B
You two are an inspiration.

Susan
We all do. Hugs

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