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there came quiet
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there came quiet |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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there came quiet the colors of your guava skin, its taste, persimmon spread in red syllables and quicksilver spills in the folds of this tickled silence, laden with prophesy the white thought of love leaps through the tamarack pastures, suet to the shadows of dahlias, flesh you say, is water and its symmetry, a penetrating insound of pure ebullience, love in the pale baton of light you coax from cognac eyes, open my veins to every thorn in the garden, rumors of rain say nothing and endure, spread over panes of glass where butterflies drown in the sweat of our charms and moths drop from the true color of lunacy, cold depths lapse softly into my flesh, I hurt, in that quiet shatter of light, and from moth-eaten thighs you soak the napalm of earth with velvet tears and lavender, spread its dark balsam to quell the quick faith with liquorish, as relunctantly the soul speaks what the body has written, and gives-in to its asylum. 2004 copyright babygirLPress **because you move me** |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
......as relunctantly the soul speaks what the body has written, and gives-in to its asylum. ~*~ *smiling* Thank you. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
ummm..you're welcome? whatever for? lol...thanks for hitting this, Sunshine... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
silky words, sexy flow |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
candle of glass with wax want your wick wicked writhes the palms penned in pillowstone ink ms a pleasure to stand by this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I don't believe I've ever heard it described more beautifully  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, but is you that spoils us - you are really going to create some work for people in here, and that dear poetess is a very good thing! To inspire others is a gift, now I shall say no more, but know I read okay  enuf with the comments already. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Aenimal~ again, thanks for the sexy glance right back atcha' **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
dark, you have moved me into verse time and again...it is my pleasure to be in your backyard... candles...and glass... mmmmmmm **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LeeJ~ thank you for the smiles...so much appreciated... and my Mysteria~we have so much in common...I feel like we have known each other for years already...thank you for the encouragement...it means alot to me... love&light, **babygirL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
smashing!.....absolutely.  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows ~ani difranco~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Mighty... curvacious -- I mean: courageous... Cool vocab and hot imagery make for a premium blend. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
You described everything so perfectly - much enjoyed.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you all for stopping in on this...i must say i am absolutely overwhelmed with the amount of warmth I have found here at PIP...a true sanctuary... love&light, **babygirL** |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You write tasty! I do like your way with images! I'll watch for more of you.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Ratleader... thanks so much for stopping to peek inside... **babygirL** |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Beautiful writing. I love it. coyote 8) |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, Coyote... the feeling is mutual, BTW...and I look forward to reading more of you... **babygirL** |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
This has dreamlike imagery. It is a beautifully penned piece. Thank you for sharing it. Jen |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thanks for stopping in on it, Jen... **babygirL** |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm so glad I went back in here so I didn't miss this one! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
there came quiet the colors of your guava skin, its taste, persimmon spread in red syllables and quicksilver spills in the folds of this tickled silence, laden with prophesy the white thought of love leaps through the tamarack pastures, suet to the shadows of dahlias, flesh you say, is water damn |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
passing shadows....thank you... lol...and a damn from cpat...all's good..lol thanks, love **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
what a deep ending to a already deep write to start with , since your not posting new ones i am reading some of the old ones hahaa PeAcE ~J In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i would like to see you post again ARCTIC WIND |
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