Open Poetry #33 |
The Viking and the Gypsy - Part II, darkness |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
The Viking and The Gypsy Part II The dragon descended deep Within sprawling caverns dark Clutched ‘neath his wing the gypsy lass “I shall eat you” – he breathed a spark “Then pick my teeth with your bones Fear for the worst, this day, to come to pass” The Caverns dark enveloped them Only light was by his self made flame Casting dancing devils upon ragged walls Despair, Sorrow, and hopelessness These were the plagues the dragon made The abyss, the chasm in which to fall To give in, to be eaten, to be consumed This could not be her fate- So Gypsy Maid began her word spells to spin Her voice, though woeful, still carried tune And magic was woven in shining cascade With hope and love and soul blended within The dragon’s clutch began to loosen Letting go the prey he craved His intent lulled from the beauty’s charm And there- from afar- a light trickled in White and shining with call to home Gypsy fled then towards hope’s waiting arm But not far behind the dragon came Having lost the spell of her song He would have this beauty as his meal For how could she imagine there to be an escape From this darkness of his own creation She would yet submit to his devil’s sin will s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK, I am hooked...now reel in this big fish and win the trophy....Where are her tools now? Surely she could throw one to the Gypsy Lass? Hmmmmmm............. [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-14-2004 09:43 PM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling at you Barry - you warm my heart with your fun replies - I'll have to look in my closet Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
come on dragon guy...don't give up so easy...a tasty morsel fair is worthy of the pepto bismo after.. go dragon go dragon oh sorry..(grin) so many images that one could spend time exploring...more please? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a fantastic read and story...I vote for the gypsy...she's gonna tame that ol dragon...bringing him to forget his anger and mean ness, she will show him a better side of life gulp...I hope? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- you crack me up. But I guess the dragon needs a following, otherwise, what fun would the story be? LeeJ- hehe, ah the cliff hanger, huh? Kinda like the old dime stories. Hugs both - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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