Open Poetry #33 |
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Loaning Voice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296![]() |
Ocean, live in concert, to slow moons Neath bright night chasing dawn But of mysterious things Where the heart sings Calling to madmen In rainbow adornment, rejecting the entice of fabric values Fingers tracing cathedral door ways Garlands of ivy looking through Secret soul of self to hold Where children romp and chew The moods of living Unleashing spiritualists We hear the sound of October’s maybe Oh philosopher with irrelevant names The lady takes an armful of spirit From which imagination draws dawn Subtlest perfumes enormously literate Containing another man’s love thoughts We are mixed thoughts of someone? Fermented pleasures drink my soul Flames of lustful vertigo Laden with preparation codes Of the best intentions Which has taken my mind Aloof and fresh, air brushing the stranger Who listens now? We become the guests of home With a course of connection to whole We are the visitors….of moments Like a promenade of colorful greens Senses increased with age Scarlet blues and wide eyed roses In breathless spells of intuitive forces Gives motive for a guiding light Ingested within the mind’s Hines sight? Elements of even breath of sacred birds Kissing heaven’s enchanted warm skin Behold as silvery waters become Light to the seers of wisdom Where I’ve always been a wealthy woman This poem was written in honor to my family Son, daughter in law, grand-daughter and the many people who have been instrumental in bringing me snuggly into today, including many of the PIP poets who have loaned their voice! Thank you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your family ribbons tied together with love hands God hears the silk of your heart lovely work lady Lee J |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
"Fermented pleasures drink my soul" wow..outstanding imagery here... **babygirL** |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "The lady takes an armful of spirit From which imagination draws dawn Subtlest perfumes enormously literate" You are these things and more in tunes, with voices and visions that amaze the blue rooms! ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Incredible writing and so much depth! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
We are so influenced by those about us, who gift us parts of themselves which become a part of us. I so love your words and the beauty you weave with them with your talent- Enjoyed- ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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