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Hypnotic Poison... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Half~risen covering morning eyes with daffodil waves the yellow is sickening rushing a motion of sea to any stomach.. I watch it peeling back wallpaper ~ uncovering wallflowers You're always there in some background fighting to become the scene the uncovered spite of setting conscious decisions to sleep attempting hypnotic poison parading certain colours ~ I covered up for a reason. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even your soul drips poetry... Missed ya, Gem Drops! Loves 'n hugs, LL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have such a unique way of saying things, gemjop. *smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So good to read you again Gem.... Love this! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
peeling back wallpaper ~ uncovering wallflowers ========================= how cool is that!!! Gemma-girlie...where you been? the moth wants more more more  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Gemmy, missed you and reading you, welcome back, hope you'll stay and articulate more words of paintings for a while. Good one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent imagery, Gemma... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're always there in some background fighting to become the scene the uncovered spite of setting conscious decisions to sleep Your writing is a wonder dear gemma, and this is a brilliant illustration of all things that lie beneath. Truly, a fascinating read!! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing, Little Friend. It's really good to see you, Gemma. Hope all is well? Hey, I like the brown hair.  Heart Hugs to you, Ethel Mae |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"You're always there in some background fighting to become the scene" Gemma, those lines are outstanding!! How many times have I fought to be the scene? And how many people have I watched do the same....I think to some degree we all want it..   "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! Enjoyed. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is always a reason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nothing has better expressed your feelings on a certain bastard welshman than these right here. vulnerable and caustic at the same time. hands down, this is my favourite and possibly your best. |
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