Open Poetry #33 |
Tree talk |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Tree Talk In a park far away on a bright sunny day, I’d a moment to spend and I found a good friend. Not a love would she be, but we sat ‘neath a tree And we spoke of how life could be filled with such strife. As we talked in the sun, it was really such fun, For we had not a care in that moment somewhere. Not a love would she be, but I sensed that a “we” Would continue to last from that moment we cast. Now that day’s slipped away, we are back in the fray Of the days we have still as we drink of life’s fill. Not a love would she be, that good friend ‘neath a tree. But I think of that time and a moment sublime. Did I say she has nice eyes? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whooohoooo Ken!! Love these moments when they happen in our lives.. sometimes our souls just connect with another immediately and you just know. I love this...may I keep it? Oh, btw, what colour were her eyes? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how lovely the smiles from a friend to these blue pages...it's nice to share with such special ones...thanks for writing and showing your heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a charming poem, Ken. Isn't it wonderful when we can share special times with friends, and know that the friendship is returned? Your tree-toned poem will be a for her, I'm sure! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely lovely! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ken "As we talked in the sun, it was really such fun, For we had not a care in that moment somewhere." Moments like these are treasures for all time to remember. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
True, true, true....and....true. Making new friends is rare enough in any part of life -- and in some, like this one we share, even more so. ....to find one with nice eyes, well....that's special anywhere! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Amazing how pleasant and refreshing tree talks can be, leafing you with a smile. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love to read you |
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