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vandana
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0 posted 2004-10-13 10:58 AM



You didn't see why?
Why the reason could be found
I have been going in circles and
circles in round
Wondering if you could see through
What is going on?
What is going on?
Into my heart,
In my life,
Life is bittersweet sometimes
To find such love,
You didn't feel
How much I love you?
And yet you didn't see
What happened to my heart?
you didn't realise
The timing of my beating heart,
My heart aches a lot lately
for you,
It's too late now
To see where is my love now?
You didn't see
Through my feelings
Each day of spring
Each day of a broken heartache,
Heart stills ache
Each day of autumn
Autumn, burning sun on the ocean,
Autumn brings a lot of memories,
On my mind
You are always on the run,
To look ot for a new love,
But yet you didn't see me crying?
You didn't see me trying
So hard to get your love,
You didn't see me hard enough
for love,
You didn't see .......



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-13 11:17 AM


Some just never see past
their blinders, Vandana...
and you certainly got to
the heart of the matter
with this post...


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-10-13 11:50 AM


But yet you didn't see me crying?
You didn't see me trying
So hard to get your love,
You didn't see me hard enough
for love,
You didn't see .......


Hugs Vandanna....yes Sunshine is right, some folks never see.  Very well done.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-10-13 12:58 PM


extremely painful moment, which I hope in the future will give you not only insight, but a wealth of love.....
hugs

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-10-13 04:10 PM


Oh I could feel the ache....like it was my own



Maree



cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-10-13 04:13 PM


Ah this hurts Vandana...but you wrote it well!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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