Open Poetry #33 |
You Didn't See? |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
You didn't see why? Why the reason could be found I have been going in circles and circles in round Wondering if you could see through What is going on? What is going on? Into my heart, In my life, Life is bittersweet sometimes To find such love, You didn't feel How much I love you? And yet you didn't see What happened to my heart? you didn't realise The timing of my beating heart, My heart aches a lot lately for you, It's too late now To see where is my love now? You didn't see Through my feelings Each day of spring Each day of a broken heartache, Heart stills ache Each day of autumn Autumn, burning sun on the ocean, Autumn brings a lot of memories, On my mind You are always on the run, To look ot for a new love, But yet you didn't see me crying? You didn't see me trying So hard to get your love, You didn't see me hard enough for love, You didn't see ....... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some just never see past their blinders, Vandana... and you certainly got to the heart of the matter with this post... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
But yet you didn't see me crying? You didn't see me trying So hard to get your love, You didn't see me hard enough for love, You didn't see ....... Hugs Vandanna....yes Sunshine is right, some folks never see. Very well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
extremely painful moment, which I hope in the future will give you not only insight, but a wealth of love..... hugs |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I could feel the ache....like it was my own Maree cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows ~ani difranco~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this hurts Vandana...but you wrote it well! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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