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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The world propels In deafening zeal A gale to face Its constant tenor teal The blur of wind swept noise Decelerates in speed and poise Crackling of a static white…drone of indeterminate light Withdrawn the rigorous climb…descend the caverns of benign Returning me to restful rhythm Confident, the shades draw with them, peace Settlement of volley, par and lease Of sable walls surround me Candle lit, where right has found me Silence lays a knowing hand upon my weary mind That time has twirled the curls along my neck in tender vine Into tune of inner voices soft and singing Lathered in the scent of jasmine tease left ringing Leaving not a button done The chilly fingers of beseech meander linen drapes of peach Where paisley socks mit painted toes, and comforted the less one knows And pink the sunset dreams in audible collections Savor long the well, to state of quieter selections Copyright Kkh 10/12/04 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Returning me to restful rhythm Confident, the shades draw with them, peace Settlement of volley, par and lease ~*~ This appeals to me... Enjoyed this much, Kathleen... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya  Good day the entire poem was done so beautifully, but the last line is to be savored forever Bravo!!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read... Thanx for sharing... *~coco~* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very much enjoyed and the following verse is one I think I can find my own secret space in. *************** That time has twirled the curls along my neck in tender vine Into tune of inner voices soft and singing Lathered in the scent of jasmine tease left ringing ************** As I have found all of yours to be, a very enjoyable read. You sit at your own level in verse. |
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