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Open Poetry #33

You did it all

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-10-12 02:20 AM

Speak to me in silence
so I can hear your words
calm my restlessness
and move the dark and dreary
to the clouds of yesterday.

Touch me with your needs
in the stillness of the night
so I can open the door
to my own desire.

Look into my eyes
in the light of morning sun
so I can rise to welcome in
the passion you inspire.

Listen to my heart
and the music of my soul
so I can feel you dancing me
around the floor of love.

Now please feel my tears
run heartache down your cheeks
because you did it all
and then turned away!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-10-12 02:28 AM

Excellent poem of passion, Helen. I liked the flow very much...kind of got caught up in it....and then the last verse was so strong. Hugs to you dear lady. ....jo

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-10-12 02:32 AM

Hi, Jo - Good to see you here. It's just one of those "remembering days". Be well!

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