Open Poetry #33 |
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Margin of Air |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Beyond the borders of constricting margins, There is a place unmarked with lines of blue or red, A place for overflow. A residence for last minute words to air, a quiet space for them to blare; If desired revised, Erased. A place to pond her overflow, to sift words, then let their ripples go. Or in the water, let thoughts drown. Guesting ink spun thread in its reservoir with lily pads, paper wads; It's a space of resting until further led. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow... I'm in awe |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Passing Shadows, Thanks for your spirited comment. It's good to hear from you again. misc. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscellanea I guess there is that place...thank you for reminding me...I need it many times. Wonderful write! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now how does that phrase go....."To air is human......" heheheh.....No, seriously, great poem, miscellanea. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Clever title! Wonderful write! I appreciate the message inherent in your words that were expressed so poetically!!! May the ink in your well, never dry up! ![]() EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...so much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
misc'e... you did well here... deep, thoughtful, provocative... very well, indeed... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Martie, I would have never guessed that you needed the margin of air. Your writing always seems to flow with such ease. misc'e iliana, Glad you enjoyed it. It's good to hear from you again. misc'e Soleil Noir, Thank you for your kindness and for the spelling of my new nickname. I couldn't think of how I wanted to shorten it, and then I saw your salutation. Thanks! misc'e Earth Angel, I'm glad you liked the title and contents. May the ink in your well never dry. misc'e Enchantress, Your flattery is much too kind, but certainly appreciated. Thanks! misc'e |
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