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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2004-10-09 12:18 PM

         to read an acre of green
when the pages
have been charred
    and lay scattered
                         whispering
        in sharp breezes
                   fresh carved
              from primary colors

   a giant hum
            cocoons
                      in wild onion
                       and old age

      the sun
seen
      but not felt

time?
  ...both

             and then

I put myself away

promising
     the Oil

of Spring

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-10-09 12:20 PM

yes, the promise of another spring

an appealing image, especially when you're feeling a bit rusty...(rusty...meaning me, not you )

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-10-09 02:25 AM

Hi Brian,

I always enjoy your thoughts (though I may not always understand)and this is another wonderful creation.

and this...

and then

I put myself away

......I especially loved the image this portrays....

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-09 03:38 AM

and what a sight from that view, my bro . . . (so smart you are)

*clapping hands*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-09 04:25 AM

nice one

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-09 11:05 AM

interesting - I like the introspective feel of this-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2004-10-09 11:30 AM

ah yes the primary colors turned secondary by the chill of autumn, the dying leaves feeding the future green...a lovely scene you have scattered so artfully across the page!

one thing that amazes me apart from your words, how some of you are so successful at a layout such as this...I cannot get this to happen without dotting my way between words. Every time I try, everything always lines up at the left margin. Hats off to ya!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2004-10-09 12:40 PM

We are done mowing for the last time here as well, and you set the scene for outside my window today Bri, except it is pouring. Have a great weekend.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2004-10-09 02:37 PM

It's as I have said all along. You m'love, are the poet.

beautiful

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2004-10-11 03:23 PM

And now it's time to pick up the maul...

Geez, I hate winter!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2004-10-11 03:30 PM

I put myself away

promising
the Oil

of Spring

loved this image. What a promise to ones self huh....wow. well done Brian.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2004-10-12 04:56 PM

*bump*

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