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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-10-07 04:20 AM


Within and surrounded by inactiveness.
A nowhere state, of thought, of heart, a maze of mind.

The rules have been descarded, free to wander,
i am like a newly released animal from captivity, that is happier to stay in its safe cage.
Should i take tentative steps into the world again?

Oh where are the simple days, of glory? Of beauty?
Dark days are my lot, my suffering matching the weather.

The ache of lonliness shadows me all through my days.
Filthy dark rain washes my tears, hides my love.
Waiting for a rainbow to lift me, or snow to bring back magic, in swirling dreamscapes she is standing with smiling face and eyes so wonderous.

Like a seed laying dormant in cold ground,
waiting for warmth, my flower of emotion will burst forth in profusion once again, and the miracle of seeing a newly grown plant,with pastel colours vibrant and alive in deep snow, will melt the hearts of those who love.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-07 08:04 AM


Phil, this reads so painful but somewhere amidst all of this pain...
I see a rainbow shining through...

may your days always be colored with the beauty of the rainbow.  well done sir.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-10-07 12:04 PM


oh....I understand...

there is always Spring
sometimes a long wait indeed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-07 01:36 PM


"Waiting for a rainbow to lift me, or snow to bring back magic, in swirling dreamscapes she is standing with smiling face and eyes so wonderous."

Some wonderful imagery here!
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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