Open Poetry #33 |
Wet Sheets |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I remember... summer sun coming up from the east and me pinning wet sheets to the clothesline, amazed at their brilliant white... while you, on the opposite side... watched shadow figures... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
AHA! Deca's come home and the summer is starting to sizzle!! Love this Deca girl...great images! Hugs~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yay! for the cool poem and the fact you're here! enjoyed the bright/shadow contrast |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
lol i was thinking about something else when reading the title! It surprised me in a magnificent way loved readin this and... i hope summer comes soon, only rain over here! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice writing, Ms Silhouette M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, good to read you again Deca! Thankyou for this keeper. hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lovely suggestions here, Deca...you've a definite touch for the sensuous. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heres to having to wash those sheets again. Nice to read you again MS Flame. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang...that's good |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Maybe I'm just a contrarian, but that view of shadow figure sounds pretty good to me....depending whose figure, of course.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca I'd forgotten how that happens..thank you so much for reminding me! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this vision, hmmmmm, yep . . . Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes indeedeeeeee....I am liking the vision of this as well. I can see those shadows now.... |
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