Open Poetry #33 |
shiver winds |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
shiver winds blow cold they whisper of blue ice days and frozen flow tears s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful Senryu Susan. The combination of shivers and whispers is perfect. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ This is just lovely~ You may have just inspired a little form-thought to flow~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Honestly... you have a way with words.... a wonderful way! Spectacular...I really do look up to you and your work. You are so talented and should be proud of yourself. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the prophesy of the winds as it sweeps us in its path |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Where is my coat? Sheesh, not yet, ok? Remember, that is why I live DOWN SOUTH.. Yeah, way down there....where the hurricanes grow! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully expressed Susan and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all for your kind comments - Devine Child - you are very sweet, thank you so much - Barry - would that I could move, as the bite is in the air already here - brrrrr, then again hurricanes aren't exactly a summer picnic! Have a good night all - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
burrrrrrr |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
short.... but impacting... nicely done ma'am |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
You have so much talent susan...this is another amazing write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you my friends - you warm this chill - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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