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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-06 08:25 AM

land of odin
where the braznap are wolves
hunting the leaning tree woman
and making break back sounds
then laughter

their eyes are gray
like the mist on wristend fiord
that rises in the morning
when the longships glide
like velvet oar jaguars

shadow men are dark stones
that move the water
there is no wake
only protrusions
fitting the opening of sky

and the sky is soft sounded
hovering above tongues
listening to the forbidden words
that shiver clouds
and make the rain seep

to songs of swollen rivers

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Dark

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-10-06 08:45 AM

you always leave me filled with so much wonder MrD

Mxx

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-06 08:49 AM

Wonderful morning read...
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-06 08:51 AM

while reading this, I felt like I was watching a miraculous birth, cleansed with answers....in the necessity of things we either choose to understand or not

Incredible write, although, perhaps I've not even touched base...it is what I saw

Hiya and Good Morning...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-10-06 09:07 AM

ophidian sensuosity
at its finest...

K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-06 10:20 AM

Dark -

this has a mystic, nordic feel - it is very sensuous and pleasing-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-10-06 11:19 AM

hmmmmmm...yes..Jaguars...#82, #28, #20...oh wait those aren't what you meant, huh?

I love your velvet oar jaguars also!!!

GO JAGS!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-10-06 11:56 AM

love the way you say things

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2004-10-06 12:07 PM

protrusions rippled
in lapping onslaught
caught between
break of shimmer
and glide of eyes

Behold, the complexity
of the basic
and understand, feel, breathe
the vigor

Become
that which is scenic
and recline in peaceful wisdom.

*********************
Excellent read and much enjoyed the visions.

Got a canoe?

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