Open Poetry #33 |
Unspoken |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beneath your fingers - The weight of silence pressing close against my lips. A gentle urge...to let this be enough. Knowing we continue... In the moments left unspoken. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric! I have missed reading you. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
short and sweet but says alot |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OH...sigh.... very softly romantic and passionate... just how I like 'em.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Well said, enjoyed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes silence can shred a heart... you remind of those times when it makes a heart soar. *S* Beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes, to let this be enough keeps the door wide open to the wonderful awareness of a never ending flow of love. You have this extraordinary ability to point to the essential with just a hint ... but what hint that this! Loving you, Margherita |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Eric .... you've said a lot for the imagination in just a few lines! Love this .... huggles, Marti |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
sigh !!! yes this is those wonderful moments when silence can mean so much Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Silence can speak volumes...as can these few words. Linda |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhhhhh ... such wonderfully expressed thoughts and all unspoken. Excellent!! *************** Knowing we continue... In the moments left unspoken **************** That's it exactly. Wonderful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quietly listening, to another's heartbeat |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
this was beautiful. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
again a world of sentiment captured in a few words.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just came back to let this gem of yours release its beautiful essence again ... it has such a soothing effect ..... Loving you, Margherita |
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