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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2004-10-04 07:22 PM

And I wanted to tell you
so many times
but the words were choked
by pride
by fear

too many times
I looked at you
unable to comprehend
why you were the only one
that didn’t know
that couldn’t see

endless nights I ached
for understanding
for answers
and still my heart repeated...
‘why’

and I needed to tell you
regardless of the late hour
or the unrequited emotions
I just needed you to know

I love you
I’ve always loved, you
I will forever
love
you

~SEA~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-10-04 07:24 PM

Beautiful declaration of your love Susan.
Wonderfully penned.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2004-10-04 07:42 PM

"endless nights I ached
for understanding
for answers
and still my heart repeated...
‘why’"

I know the feeling well.

Nicely penned, SEA.

Billy 8)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2004-10-04 07:46 PM

Ever enchanting, SEA...

the graphic and poetry lends to each other kindly, and as always your earnest heart shines so intent, I'm frankly surprised there are no indentations on my screen.

Smile.

In other words, lovely.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-04 08:13 PM

Oh I felt this one, deeply.

Beautiful expressed SEA, and I love the graphic too

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2004-10-04 11:36 PM

"
too many times
I looked at you
unable to comprehend
why you were the only one
that didn’t know
that couldn’t see"
******************

perhaps maybe blinded by love's light?

Wonderful write and much enjoyed. One that I think maybe more out there that can relate to than maybe willing to admit it.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-10-04 11:41 PM

yes yes, before regrets sink in

beautiful words Susan

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-10-05 12:04 PM

Blind! He's just blind. Lucky. But blind. Pity... Bunnie hugs sweet lady and a lot of 'em.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2004-10-05 12:10 PM

thank you guys so much... I'm so grateful to have a place to bring my heart, and share it...knowing, you will understand and relate. and Raph? sometimes after they already have hon...the words still need to be said.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-10-05 12:49 PM

And now I know...I know this is not for me, but someone's got some nice words coming to them...James

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2004-10-05 11:57 AM

oh but that ache makes for such lovely heart-on-sleeve-SEA-poetry.

*smiling at Sens reply*

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

11 posted 2004-10-05 12:09 PM

Perfectly beautiful!

Eric

msrascalx
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since 2004-09-25

Posts 15
Conway, SC

12 posted 2004-10-05 12:22 PM

I don't think I've read anything more beautiful.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-10-05 01:21 PM

an honest and touching write
very much enjoyed

Paula Finn
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missouri

14 posted 2004-10-05 01:23 PM

And sometimes even after you finally say the words...it still doesnt seem as if they were heard....beautiful Sea

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2004-10-05 02:11 PM

Sea your writing always captivates me, and this is indeed one of those times...
how very lovely this is. Hugs and peace. ~D~

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

16 posted 2004-10-05 02:26 PM

i too know this feeling to well

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

17 posted 2004-10-05 02:56 PM

Beautiful poetry, from a beautiful heart.

Rf

Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

18 posted 2004-10-05 04:59 PM

Love the art work, and the "heart-cry" following. Greatly enjoyed!

Robert Joseph

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2004-10-05 05:37 PM

beautiful!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

20 posted 2004-10-05 07:18 PM

sigh - love softely woven

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2004-10-05 08:05 PM

SEA~
You KNOW you touch me with your lovely thoughts~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

22 posted 2004-10-05 09:52 PM

SEA..
I can feel the words there at the end, the state of needing to say the words..needing the other person to hear!!

much enjoyed

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

23 posted 2004-10-06 07:37 PM

Just wanted to feel the lovely sigh in this one again Sea...

wonderful writing....

devinechild22
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Posts 571

24 posted 2004-10-06 07:49 PM

I am touched... I relate.

*Allison*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

25 posted 2004-10-08 09:38 AM

just wanted to thank you all so very much for reading and replying but mostly, for understanding and relating.

thank you!

Michael

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California

26 posted 2004-10-08 06:46 PM

Achingly beautiful..,

Well done.

SEA

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Posts 22676
with you

27 posted 2004-10-08 07:24 PM

Michael, thank you for that. I admire your poetic skills SO much. It means a lot that you would say that.

CocoBaci
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Posts 3043

28 posted 2004-10-10 05:12 AM

Most enjoyed this read SweetPoetFriendSea...

*~coco~*

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

29 posted 2004-12-01 03:54 AM

Methinks I know this feeling all too well...
Love this.
*hug*, Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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