Open Poetry #33 |
Your touch |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Arcobaleno by Melita * Your touch so soft ... * Your touch so soft, like the breeze caressing the tender new grass. In response I arch like a rainbow holding you in my coloured strings. We listen to the Earth as she sighs, in quiet pleasure to the song of our souls. The stars hear too, and they claim us, for we belong into their radiance. Once airborne, we are drawn like magnets into ethereal splendour. We fly, we dance, in love we soar. Deep wonder reflecting in our eyes. Your touch so soft ... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh my goodness!! i love this!! "In response I arch like a rainbow" "The stars hear too, and they claim us, for we belong into their radiance" Bravo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I arch like a rainbow holding you in my coloured strings." ~ Margherita, you are uniquely creative in your visuals! This poem truly was a joy to behold! Loving Light, Linda |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The words are so very,very beautiful, but the heart that wrote them is much more radiant. I love your passion! coyotyl |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is beautiful |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
The artwork colors the eyes...your words color the soul. Robert Joseph |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Margherita, this is absolutely beautiful! Love the arching imagery. Keeper. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
In response I arch like a rainbow holding you in my coloured strings. exquisite lines here and throughout |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your images are spectacular. Just beautiful! Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...lovely...James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I love this! Great graphic and great writing! You really outdid yourself with this piece. Hugs, Marti When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I love this! Great graphic and great writing! You really outdid yourself with this piece. Hugs, Marti When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Margherita! Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends! To know we are loved we just need a tender touch it will warm our hearts Love, Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Full of soft passion spoke as only those special moments would intend. Quiet comfort at it's best. Very lovely read. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
georgous. a perfect way to start a day thanks so much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Mark and dear Marge for your loving comments. Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, this reminded me of going Home . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Margherita, you are a harmonic breeze with natures intent...guiding your pen which speaks such tremendous capability Hugs |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Margerhita , the shone , glowed and flowed absoloutely beautifully Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful creation |
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