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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-10-02 07:12 PM




Arcobaleno by Melita


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Your touch so soft ...


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Your touch so soft,
like the breeze caressing
the tender new grass.
In response
I arch like a rainbow
holding you
in my coloured strings.
We listen to the Earth
as she sighs,
in quiet pleasure
to the song
of our souls.
The stars hear too,
and they claim us,
for we belong
into their radiance.
Once airborne,
we are drawn
like magnets
into ethereal splendour.
We fly, we dance,
in love we soar.
Deep wonder
reflecting
in our eyes.

Your touch so soft ...

© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-10-02 08:07 PM


Oh my goodness!! i love this!!

"In response
I arch like a rainbow"

"The stars hear too,
and they claim us,
for we belong
into their radiance"

Bravo


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-10-02 08:31 PM


"I arch like a rainbow
holding you
in my coloured strings."

~ Margherita, you are uniquely creative in your visuals! This poem truly was a joy to behold!

Loving Light,
Linda



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3 posted 2004-10-02 08:37 PM


The words are so very,very beautiful,
but the heart that wrote them is much more radiant.

I love your passion!

coyotyl

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-10-02 08:55 PM


This is beautiful
Robert Joseph
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5 posted 2004-10-02 10:41 PM


The artwork colors the eyes...your words color the soul.

Robert Joseph

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6 posted 2004-10-02 11:01 PM


Wow, Margherita, this is absolutely beautiful! Love the arching imagery.
Keeper.

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7 posted 2004-10-02 11:13 PM


In response
I arch like a rainbow
holding you
in my coloured strings.


exquisite lines here
and throughout

Patricia
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8 posted 2004-10-02 11:59 PM


Your images are spectacular.  

Just beautiful!

Patricia

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9 posted 2004-10-03 12:29 PM


Aha...lovely...James
NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2004-10-03 12:49 PM


I love this! Great graphic and great writing! You really outdid yourself with this piece.

Hugs, Marti

When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country.
                    -Elayne Boosler-

NewEnglandlazurlu
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11 posted 2004-10-03 12:55 PM


I love this! Great graphic and great writing! You really outdid yourself with this piece.

Hugs, Marti

When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country.
                    -Elayne Boosler-

Ericc
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12 posted 2004-10-03 08:54 AM


Beautiful Margherita!

Love,
Eric

Margherita
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13 posted 2004-10-03 10:57 AM


Thank you my friends!


To know we are loved

we just need a tender touch

it will warm our hearts



Love, Margherita  

Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2004-10-03 11:51 AM


Full of soft passion spoke as only those special moments would intend.  Quiet comfort at it's best.  Very lovely read.
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15 posted 2004-10-06 08:11 AM


georgous. a perfect way to start a day
thanks so much


Margherita
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16 posted 2004-10-06 08:28 AM


Thank you dear Mark and dear Marge for your loving comments.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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17 posted 2004-10-06 09:02 AM


Oh, this reminded me of going Home . . .
LeeJ
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18 posted 2004-10-06 09:10 AM


Margherita, you are a harmonic breeze with
natures intent...guiding your pen which speaks such tremendous capability

Hugs


HopeS
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19 posted 2004-10-06 11:19 AM


Margerhita , the shone , glowed and flowed absoloutely beautifully

Hope

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20 posted 2004-10-06 11:52 AM


a beautiful creation
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